feed back from digipak

This was my original idea for my digipak front cover. However, i didn't have very positive feed back for it as the writing is difficult to read, therefore I will have to come up with a new idea.

Album Poster Ideas

My idea is to have three photo strips of different people, that has been taken in a photo booth. I would like the people to look happy by either smiling, pulling funny faces or hugging each other.  For example:

                        

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Digipak front cover ideas

Possible digipak pictures

Digipak draft

First draft storyboard

Planning: Mind map

This mind map has a few basic ideas on what things I think would suit my chosen song. For example, when analysing the lyrics found it was a love song, so that gave me the idea of a man and woman couple dancing together in a large room. However, although the song has a few upbeat moments it has an overall forsaken tone, which lead me to consider either a man or woman dancing in a large room on their own to reflect the sorrowful tone of the song.